Not Long Lost

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Not Long Lost

Somewhere in New York City, a girl gets lost in four letters or less. A kind policeman and his dog come to the rescue. Thank goodness this blurb isn't part of the contest requirement!


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uncson3

Amazing work. I like the fact that you imagine a lot within a few words. Be blessed, Danny....

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RevkenR

I love happy endings too.

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judycolella

Oh, my goodness! I never thought anyone would read any of these now that the contest is long over - thank you!

Love the beagle, by the way. Every time I see your icon I give a tiny girlie-shriek of delight. 'D

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angamonkey

this was ADORABLE. I am so glad that I decided to read this before heading to work, the simplicity and happy ending is enough to put anyone in a feel good mood.

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judycolella

Really? Thanks! Come to think of it, my daughter is an awesome artist. Maybe I could work with her to turn it into the kind of children's book you describe. Thank you for that, and for your kind comments! =D

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queenguinevere97

I think that your entry could also double as a great children's book. With some big pictures, it would be fun to read, and easy for kids.
-me ;)

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judycolella

@ripples
Thank you! It was a challenge but lots of fun to write! I appreciate your feedback. :D

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judycolella

Sorry...having a Brooklyn moment there... anyway, thank you! I really appreciate the kind, encouraging feedback!

And yes, Felix, for a person of my wordy propensities and occasional Howardcosellitis, it was VERY difficult!

"D

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mokomonko

this was cute. a good children's story and a worthy entry for this contest. ^_^

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felixthecat

That was sweet, Judy. It must have been terribly hard...what did Paula say?
:) :) :) I think she liked it! Well, I did too:)

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