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I like how you describe certain scenes. Just found some grammatical errors but overall, I still like it. I can relate myself to the protagonist.
Our books are somewhat similar because mine also talk about dreams colliding with reality (a different sense of 'dreaming' though). If you have time, I hope you could also check it out and give it a vote if you liked it. The title is "London's Dream Diary". Good luck. You have my vote here.

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