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Good plot but it was just to much I mean married and pregnant when they just met seriously? other than that it was okay but I just think it would of been amazing if you just let the story work it self out a little just a little but good idea for the story though. :P
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Is it too early for me to bash my head against a brick wall? Have you not read a published Novel before? You know, one without cyber tal (idk) as dialogue? With words that are existing and not made up? I liked your idea but... Seriously?
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i agree,she had a good plot or story line,but i felt that she rushed in to it ...you should let the story flow and develop as you go along.
again a good idea but should have been organised better.
Although it was short, this story is actually pretty interesting. I hope to read more.
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you should really expand on the theme and show some more love scenees
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I can't remember if i posted this or not, and if I did, why
why is it so short? you could have definately dragged it out more and gave us more details. just saying but it was really good
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9ice book, loved it! Is it a book in a series?
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I agree
I totally agree