hey guys! OMG! It's been for ages! I am so extremely sorry I just updated my book. I have a trouble logging in to this account because i couldn't remember the email that I used so I made a new account which is juicy_jhay95. Then today i totally remember that I had it written on one of my old notebooks and I just got logged in today. I put up a new chapter in this book and it's not edited. My grammar is a bit off and I... mehr anzeigen
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its really good
tell me wen u update plz
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hey guys! OMG! It's been for ages! I am so extremely sorry I just updated my book. I have a trouble logging in to this account because i couldn't remember the email that I used so I made a new account which is juicy_jhay95. Then today i totally remember that I had it written on... mehr anzeigen
This isn't a bad plot and I'm actually looking forward to see what will happen next. :) Though, I would like to point out, you did make a few errors in your story, but that's okay. Throughout your book I realized you were tense hopping a little bit. For example:
"I felt the atmosphere inside the room became sad and friendly but it soon vanished as quickly as it appears..."
A lot of people do this and even I do this from time... mehr anzeigen
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write more
Please update this book I love it and want to know more about the story please.