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Jesus, I like your book of poetry. The lines flowed well and the rhymes were clever. The last one surprised me, by the stranger's identity. I sensed many emotions throughout these verses and found myself caught up in their rhythm.

These are light, rhythmic and heartwarming poems. I like the first one. Good luck in the contest!