BookRix

Hi, ! I would like to invite you to join my platform. Can I DM you through your s0c1al M3d14, so I can explain it more in detail? Thank You

oh please complete it i really loved the story and i want to know what happen next ....

You've made my night with your kind words. I describe the world in the second chapter. I still have some tweaking to do with what I already have and finishing it. This is why I'm glad I found this site. I love the type of people here and hope I can return the favor you all have given me. I'm looking forward to reading some of your work.

With an open mind and sincere heart always; Jessica

First Welcome to bookrix.

This is a very exciting book. Well written. You jumped right into the action, and I appreciated the commentaries in the story about the characters.

I have no constructive criticism right now other than to say, I would like to know more about this world.
You paint a beautiful picture of Aurora, what about the world she lives in.

I just read chapter one, so if you describe the world later I will look forward to that.

I am looking forward to reading more.

Keep up the good work.