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Definatly not so Mainstream as all the 'She is not like the others'-Stories arround. Forget about my english, I just want to say, you're great and nearly at my age. Wonderful!
Cheers,
~ Jen

Can't wait for more! Suspenseful plot and feel connection to characters already! :) Please update me as you add to this please!

Awesome start! You really need to write more of this. It sounds like a promising story.

Blessings,

Meli

I look forward to reading more of this story.
Chris

More please!!!! Its so good!
~(oxo)~

heres some help, it is about angels too. Question is, are they really the good guys.

Great start, even though I don't like to read or watch anything about demons...angels...yes.

THis is just my rough draft I am not done yet. I will fix the size in a bit.

Why is it so-o-o tiny? lol I love the evil factor you have one misspelling and when describing steps try to stay in the options all on page 9