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a poem that actually has rhymes in it! haha i've been searching for writings like these for ages..

All of these poems are based on real experiences of mine... except for the rape poem. That is all I have to say.

I feel the pain of your words. It is a sad world we live in. I know about abuse...your words are dark...yet someone will find comfort knowing that they are not alone in battles they face. When I write...if one person can feel it...understand it....take something away from it...then that is all I need. Your poem has exceeded that beyond words!

Belinda

I really liked the poem about the dark in you. We all have are dark spots, you just have to know your limits. ;}

The tacful way you describe the heinous darkness done to you. What you feel is felt by all who read your works. Keep writing sweetie! :)

It is not as easy as you make it out to be. Many poems are hard to write for me because many of my friends then see me in a new light.

Strong and moving words from one so young. You have a talent, don't let it go to waste because of errant thoughts.

these are really good i like them