Hi,
I have an offer related to writing story and I'd like to talk about it.
If you are interested, you can reach me on insta: ods.apa or message me at leonandre880 (at) g m a i l (dot) com
Thanks.
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most beautiful story EVER.
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I absolutely loved this book. It would be very neat if you had the next book feature Scarlets' life. Maybe even get Scarlet to get the dragons and 'Dark Ones' to be friendly.
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i read your book till the end.. i think it was good but maybe you rushed the ending a little.. im sorry if you dont like my opinion and good luck with the next one
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Now, you need to go back and edit. I had to learn my mistake after I had already started selling. Find someone who will help and do it chapter by chapter within a group...
You have several similar kind of mistakes, when in a conversation "...... ," you need the comma if the sentence does not end. Many times you put a period where a comma should be.
Some of your sentences are fragmented.
I did enjoy the theme and tone of the book.
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I know. I'm 16 now and I was like, 13 when I wrote this.
I loved it so much. You really should make a sequel to this. (:
<3
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does she die in the end like is she dead omg if she is i am so sad like why would you kill her off but other than that i loved lots
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awwiieee thats so sad that she died i kinda wished she didnt die though
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