Great context to the story. Honestly, it surprised me with the ending. This whole time I was reading this book I thought to myself this is going to end bad but it ended a whole different way. Well done!
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Excellent writing, especially in how it is presented in a series of journal entries. It increases the suspense factor
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I know I may be behind in posting this, but I just found this website and this story. I love it. I do have a theory on the story. I believe that Lance and Desmond are in Alicia's mind - as in she is the one with the multiple personality disorder that is in the process of being "cured" - kind of like the movie Identity with John Cusack - am I way off on this?
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But your cover hurts my eye, man!
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WOW. Very well done and enthralling. :D
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Absolutely fascinating! You spun the plot as though you were a spider! I sensed that you did some real research into psychiatry, too. Really a fine piece of work. Jodi should be proud:)
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This is an interesting story, you are a talented writer!
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Wow!awesome. Will the therapist be okay? I like it very much. U got my vote
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This story was great. It was somewhat like the movie Johnny Darko, well not really. But the guy being able to manipulate a persons head did happen in that movie. You've got my vote.
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GREAT COVER!
But, more than that you have made me put you on the top of the list for reading requests. That was excellent./joeparente
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