Finally Perfect

The path to a happy beginning Von:
Finally Perfect
Remi is the new girl, coming from a tragic childhood. An arrangment has been made and shes not sure what to do now...

"I looked at Derrick and he seemed less than interested to be here, he stood at 6’3 and was like a statue, his white dress shirt rippled over his muscles and were rolled up at the forearms, if he would have sneezed the shirt sleeve would have ripped, he wore a gray vest and dark blue jeans with black dress shoes. He had his mothers green eyes, his hair was black and was shaven close on both sides, the top he left at a medium length and was combed over to the left a little. He clenched his jaw, looked down at me, and nodded I almost melted, he looked like a Greek god."

This is my first book and I'm still working on it, if you like it then I'll work hard to complete it and if you have any criticism please leave in comments below thank you and enjoy!

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