BookRix

Haha, I wish I could ask my grandmother how much I tortured her as a boy!

Very funny!

god that was so funny but very up lifting at the same time. your so right what is life if you don't have some up's and down's, plus age is nothing but a number

lol i love this story lol
ur an amazing writer

This is the second story this week I read that I had tears running down my cheeks and a pain in my side from laughing so long and hard. And to think both had children and the 'public involved'. Children are a great inspiration and an ongoing source of merriment..

I love your neighbors already - hope to see more of your stories...Paula

Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".

The Librarian

You have my vote after reading your story again

I would have turned all colors of the rainbow if that happened to me, J.L.! I can just picture it! :))

Enjoyed the inserted quotes where relevant to enhance the mood! (no pun intended)! ;)

I agree with Joe about the size of the font and the grammatical; easily rectifiable.

Good luck, J.L.! Petra :))

Hilarious story. It took guts to write this one. There are some problems with spelling and spacing, especially at the start. a little proof reading and editing will solve that. Funny story!!,.joeparente OH, I forgot. Try to make the print larger. It would make an easier read.