Do you draw your own covers???? They're so cool! And your writing is awesome!
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It sounds like the beginning of a very interesting story. I would be interested in reading more. It sounds like a nightmare that needs to end, and soon. Good Job!
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Well the story seems quite intriguing. I would like to see you extend this story with a little help with editing.
The cover and the story idea caught me interest. I like stories like this. Good Work!
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Even though it was short, it definitely has to go on. I could feel the emotion radiating at the end. Very nice description of her struggle, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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It's intriguing. I hope you decide to add more. Let me know...
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Remember you have to have the minimum of 300 words to enter the contest, but judging by the comments here, it looks like you intend to expend it.
Let me know when you do and I'll come back and have a read.
Good luck
Wendy
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Remember you have to have the minimum of 300 words to enter the contest, but judging by the comments here, it looks like you intend to expend it.
Let me know when you do and I'll come back and have a read.
Good luck
Wendy
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This is a terrific beginning, more please. Love your writing. Serena
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Thanks for the huge compliment! You just made my day. :D
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Short and sweet. I expect most people will hope you write more before voting time in August. Look forward to seeing you expand on this theme.
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