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I feel sure that older children will love to read stories of life in the jungle, Indira & truly believe there is scope to develop this book further.

It is a very interesting book. It does need a little editing, but not much. You have left some pronouns out from time to time in the story. If you re-read it I am sure you will see where. Like on page four in the second paragraph, last sentence

"It caught her off guard instantly and (she) stared in disbelief as it spoke to her."

Otherwise very good job.