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Aur lengthy ho sakta tha. Lekin koi problem nahi. Nice Story. Loved It.
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I love it! A sad but an interesting story. I'm an Indian and I totally understand how Indian culture can lead to problems like this...
All I can say is, you did a great job! :D
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that this is not a typical love story - so tragic. So sad...p
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I think you have the start of a good story here. A few grammatical errors that can be easily fixed. Good job!
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@openstake, iss book mein kisi short story competition ki liye likhi thi , thanks for reading