BookRix

Please update. I need to know what happens!!

this is the 3rd book of yours I have read and they are great just wondering if ur gunna add more at all

Hima, I congratulate you for writing a long story in what is apparently your second language. I cannot imagine writing something in Hindi, so you are to be commended. The story was good, and that is the most important part. Without a good plot, the reader becomes bored....so you did well there.

Many native born English speaking people cannot write a coherent sentence, so I shall not nitpick over your sentence structure and grammar. I understand it is very difficult to grasp all the nuances of the English language and turn them into a perfectly written book. Despite the grammar and tense issues, your book is easy to understand and I wish you every success as you improve with each story you write.

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Oh my gosh Hima, you have done such a great job with this one. Your sentences, spelling, punctuation is getting so very, very good.

Way to go! I'm so very proud of you. Besides it is also a very good and intriguing story. You are writing about what you know, your world, your surroundings. So this story has a real feel to it.

We are getting a glimpse into your culture. Excellent job, keep up the good work!!! Robynn

@ lazarus and @felix the cat :It's good to hear that u have seen the best part of India, dishes,lol.
People who have been to India will never forget the spicy and yummy dishes.
thanks for the comments :)

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I confess, I haven't finished reading it all, but what I must say...I like this for many reasons.
During Expo 67 I worked in the kitchen at an Indian restaurant at the India pavilion. The food was out of this world. And the people super friendly. The men I worked for were Mr. Khan a and Mr.Mehra....I hope I spelt them correctly. Now I have a good friend by the name of Bindu ...her maiden name was Mehra...she told me that the man I worked for was her uncle.
So...going back to your story...it, along with the dialect, brings back fond memories.
Thank you,
Laz....who loves tandoori chicken with naan and yogurt mint sauce....and also the different dishes...the hotter the better.
Sorry for rambling on...lol.

This is REALLY good, Hima! I love the slice of life, India-style, that you presented, especially the surprise ending!

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