BookRix

its a good book but in some places it seems u skiped some parts

awesome

i love it

i love it

this is really good, however, there are a few minor problems with your technical skills. I do suspect that this is because English isn't your native language, so I am even more impressed. Keep at it, and I know you'll be great. Please continue to make a couple more drafts and it will be perfect.
Rock on himabindu! Keep writing!

: )

You have written very beautifully ,I have read few pages & enjoyed the story.

Hima..very good!! Kept me reading the whole way through. I hope you add more very soon. You show great promise as a writer.

Hima..very good!! Kept me reading the whole way through. I hope you add more very soon. You show great promise as a writer.

still lvin it