My Little Travel

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My Little Travel

"Ye..." I did not finish my words when my planet beauty in the vast universe took me by surprise. The round of our planet was constant and movable with the anti-gravity which allowed it to suspend like in midair like a balloon would. It was there with the color he projected in the glass of the ship through the mix of the water, the land, the desert, the trees and the clouds. The blue sky consent the beauty of our home in the galaxy and among the other planet in the solar system.


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andrewn06
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andrewn06

It's interesting
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JennaB.56
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JennaB.56

Aside from some spelling mistakes it's a very good story, full of wonder as a good sci-fy should. I would love to read how you go about telling the next series of this new creation they have make. Although I wouldn't say it was an evolution process, but an altering of his former form from being a human to whatever you decide to call these creatures.

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