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Very interesting story so far.

I like that Cass is the "I can do everything" kind of person, literally, but you make sure to give her that unique style, and she doesn't conform to what the world thinks a scholar, or a martial arts lover should look and act like. This gives the story the realistic depth it needs to stay interesting past the first few pages.

So far, it doesn't seem much like a romance. I would put it more in the Young Adult Fiction or Drama category, but that can change as you write more.

You also did a good job of making Chase his own unique character, and the relationship between he and Cass is fun, with that sibling rivalry, but you can tell that they would kill someone to protect each other.

There are a lot of grammatical errors, but that's all superficial, so don't worry about that.

All in all, I liked the story, and wish there was more.

Thank you H B!