At The Paws Of A Wolf

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At The Paws Of A Wolf

I knew I was in danger. But I could not compare the risk of my life to his. He was everything i'd ever dreamed of my first boyfriend, sweet, funny, cute, but more. Loki was a werewolf.

Michael was a vampire. Worse, he was my overprotective, idiot brother. And the questions swarmed in my head from the minute I knew.

How far would Michael go to protect me? Will he kill Loki? Will he make me a vampire?

Did he really care so much, or was it prejudice?


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Wolf, Danger, Evil, Romance, Werewolf, Vampire, Blood
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Lillian the DESTROYER :D

Uh, so I mean no harm when I say this, so keep in mind that I only mean to offer constructive criticism, but the grammar in this needs some work. There are no apostrophes anywhere in words like "I'd", "we're", and so on. Also you need to decipher the difference between "they're", "their", and "there". I do not really like that this is another "Twilight" story. Perhaps you should look into "Interview With a Vampire" and other... mehr anzeigen

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Lillian the DESTROYER :D

I meant "and" not abductions since my phone is retarded.

Grace Mattox

Oh dont worry :) My book sure will be different. Ive got a plot in my head.

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judycolella

Quick question: how could Rosie know exactly how Bella felt if she'd never read the Twilight books? According to her brother, she'd never even picked one up.

This is one of many issues you need to check before you continue this. Clearly, you're using the plot themes from Twilight throughout, even though you're trying to make it sound like your main character is unaware of any of it. But there are other issues. Your... mehr anzeigen

judycolella

Lol! You go! 'D

Grace Mattox

Oh and btw, Rosie was at the back. She had to walk the long way, but Michael stood up behind her and pushed her the rest of the way off :)

Grace Mattox

The sequel will be better

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Rebekah Wave

This is really great! Continue like this, I favorited it! Could you check my books too and perhaps favorite them?

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Grace Mattox

Awh thanks! Sure, ill go check them out now! <3

Rebekah Wave

Thanks a lot :)

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