BookRix

A word of advice: almost all of your sentences are run ons. Please edit, and I look forward to reading it when I can understand it!

i have added abit more to an ocean view its starting to get interssting i hope you enjoy it still not finished but i ill still keep adding to it so kep an eye on it thank you for reading xx

thanks for your help i haven't wrote since high school im a little rusty but yes i will be writing more i forgot how much i enjoyed writing storys im writing a bit more each day so keep a look out and again thank u

I would suggest you read it over and correct some spelling and grammar errors, almost all of us have them. I would really like to see you put more into this story. I'm going to "heart" it so I can see if you do! :)

my 1st book well the startof it