Please update this book I want to know what happens please....
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I love it and I hope you are updating really soon
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OMG!!!! I MUST know what happens!!! Awesome book!!! Please let me know when you update :)
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this is a great book...keep it up! i love it
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Thank you :)
I think you should mention her scar on her forehead and maybe say how she hates it and how it makes her feel ugly???
ok, on page 67 and 69 you go from personal to thrid person and back and forth... oh on page 67 you say her name is Saphire again, i dunno if ya ment to or not, and i dunno if you know but page 70 is blank... so yeah lol sorry if this isnt cheery, but i write my review as i go and this is the third time i was... mehr anzeigen
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i outwitted you just there now makin you doubt yourself, questions that lay unanswered in the back of your mind, but i tell you know, I KNOW THE ANSWERS TO AAAALLLLLL THE QUESTIONS!!!! cause i am awesome, simples.
sex additcs always deny being sex addicts, so there fore you are a... mehr anzeigen
If you deny being a sex addict your a sex addict, but if you say your a sex addict your also a sex addict. Then everyone is just a sex addict then. BOOM! OUT-WITTED YOU!!! :P
If you are talking about online porn, then you flirt and gets kinky. I believe that is online porn... mehr anzeigen
i have failed my mission to outwitt you... i will be destroyed
Awww! It ended! Just when it was getting interesting...oh what a shame. Update soon!
~Cheyenne(:
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You knows it :D
first thing, page 19 and20, first his names James then Jason, i had to read the pages twice to make sure it wasnt a diff chracter, might wanna fix that :) oh, and page 22 on the first paragraph on the last word there is a " speech mark, needs to go my friend lol sorry, detail freak lol
on page 35 on the second paragraph for one sentance ya go to third person then back to personal, another detail i never fail to mis lol sorry... mehr anzeigen
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Gosh harsh girl. I know it needs fixing. I write at dead of night and my vocab is not all there, but I try! Next time tell me my mistakes in message? Really like to keep my self-confidence in tact. :D
A fixed most of them detail freak ;D
I'm the only one who can call my self a detail freak missus!! lol
I have been really busy and my laptop has broken down. It will take awhile to update, I'm sorry :(