BookRix

I love it. Excellent! I look forward to reading the finished product. :)

Thanks so much! I hope so... it is a labor of love.

Just from reading the short excerpts I can tell this is going to be a very good book.

Bravo! So beautifully written. I would love to be him there sleeping on your lap, and finding you staring at me when I awoke.

Prose in book form. You encase emotion well within words. Good job. Robynn

I appreciate everyone's comments! I'm extremely grateful - to the center of my bones! :o)

you express the thing that is so hard to express, the sublime feelings our hearts surrender to...

Your prose is beautiful...nearly flawless...and your analogies are nothing short of superb.
But, where is the next portion!!!!
Excellent writing.