BookRix

you made my day thank you so much for taking the time to read this I will add more soooooon (I hope)

I really like this story. thank you for writing it ......:)

Thank you so much, I will be posting more soon, I have been really busy with my family and work but I promise more will come soon. Again thank you so much for reading!

ok finished reading the section... you have me hooked. Keep writing!!!

Okay I read the first 2 chapters and so far I LOVE it...

great advice thanks :-) I will definatly let you know when I update more... been doing tons of overtime at work so my story has been comming along slowly :-(....

You're doing great! I love the way you've taken the plot to the next level, continuing to warp and twist your characters upon themselves. However, constant proof reading is essential. Try reading your work aloud (with or without an audience. I do mine in my linen closet) its an efficient way to make certain of inconsitencies, typos, and redundancies in your work. Let me know when there's more.

Thank you so much :-) I appreciate you reading it, stay tunned there will be more hopefully by the end of this week. Hugs!

Very nice. You've taken a rather standard story, and through imagery and turn of phrase, you have delivered something tense and exotic. Kudos to you.

Thank you so much for your encouraging review, it has definatly inspired me to continue this story :-)