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The contest is for stories that are 1,000 words or less, which disqualifies this entry also. On the positive side, though, I liked the first few pages (didn't have time to read all of it since, as I mentioned with the other story, I'm trying to be fair and read all the entries in the contest), so again, once the contest is over, I'll come back and read the rest. A quick note - "alittle" isn't a word, but two separate ones (a little). You have a great imagination from what I can see, and a talent for story-telling that will take you far. I'm looking forward to reading both of your stories soon! :)

Really, really good once i'd started i couldn't stop reading it!!! Your a superb writer x

i like it

please add more. I like it and will keep looking for more from this book.