BookRix

haha fair enough on most of those points, maybe you should check out the edited version(that is also posted)

also, errors in commas are a writers prediliction, we add them to add emphasis to a word or phrase with a pause before continuing, there is always a reason for it, even if you do not intellectually agree :)

Ok, sorry. I have a bit of OCD when it comes to books.

no i get it, sometimes people interpret commas their own way. However, a comma is used to add dramatic pause, or distinction in words, so try reading it as such, without interpreting. If I put a comma its for a reason. some people have also disagreed with my use of semicolons(its just not a thing in fantasy). But semicolons are their for a reason, to link 2 ideas thoughts or such together because they are important to each other.

I'm legit curious about the misspellings tho, because I use proper english and run the grammar/spell checks multiple times, so if you think something is misspelled I need to know, so i can see if its a legit error, or a false purposeful spelling on my part, like Wylder, is obviously not a real word and a fake spelling of the culture/time that these people exist

Thanks, glad you liked it. I'm working on finishing up the book. Then I'll be starting on book 2 and book 1 will be going to editing

Loved it!! Looking forward to book 2.

please hurry up with the update!!! :)

I just updated it lol....like 2 hours ago

What you talking bout, the cover art?

That and how Feral Heart starts off. Nice job.

ohh lol i was gonna say, there is no way you read it all that fast

Lol

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. It's actually getting close to the end up the book, so I'll be finished soon and I always post/mail about updates.

Ok can't wait. Email me when updates are up

Yeap. Once I'm done with it I'll be starting on the second book in the series, but I won't post it until I get the cover art back from my artist friend

Cool