It's a good read :)
Anyway, I have an offer related to writing story and I'd like to talk about it.
If you are interested, you can reach me on insta: ods.apa or message me at leonandre880 (at) g m a i l (dot) com
Thanks.
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u should start circulating books in the groups- everyone on bookrix should at some point in their lives read this book. heather
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A heartwarming tale. Very well told.
A couple of things....
You had a blip on page 14 for some reason.
'Me either' should be 'me neither'.
'Relief flooded them' - ?
'Struggled to not fear' - ?
I wasn't keen on the asterisks between the two POV's. I always think that a swap of POV like that should be dealt with in one's writing and then include a couple of line spaces.
I'm not saying its wrong to do what you've done there, but i... mehr anzeigen
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I voted for your book.
This is a very touching and beautiful story about how God takes care of his children. Very well written. :)
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I have already given you my heart, & now you have my vote.
Chris
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