The way future looks

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The way future looks

I write this book into the future that way people don't juge me right off the bat. I am an early college student this was a big step for me to write a book hope you like the book more than I did writing it (I thought it was fun)


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Gelöschter User

I really like your definitely a favorite

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David_Nanney

Thanks fam

Gelöschter User

Your welcome

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David_Nanney

if u like my book please tell me who u r

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Gelöschter User

I like it lovie, lmao

David_Nanney

thanks, it was my first book ever written

Gelöschter User

really? well done :)

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JEn1208

You have quite a bit of errors and it's very hard to read in general.

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David_Nanney

I tried to fix it and they just keep coming back my friends are trying to help but they are tired of my book acting up, sorry I will try again

David_Nanney

I did fix them, if you wanna try again

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judycolella

What is your first language? I'm not asking to be offensive, but while your basic story is good, there are so many language mistakes and lack of formatting that it's kind of hard to read. This has the feel of a cool movie, or a terrific book series. For that reason, it's worth fixing the errors and learning how to format a novel.

Hope this helps. ')

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David_Nanney

Okay, that is it I hate this book site, I am 14 I am english and I only know english this site keeps messing with me and my books, same with my friends. It's ok I will fix it later.

judycolella

You know, if you can't take being corrected or genuine offers for help, you'll never get very far. No one is messing with you - we're serious writers here, and I'm sorry, but you don't have many paragraphs and there are all kinds of grammatical and spelling errors that make what... mehr anzeigen

David_Nanney

Okay I fixed my book
happy
if not just know I may write more and this time I will be more careful!

judycolella

Lol, cool. Producing a really good book is hard work, but if you love to write, it's worth every minute of effort.

By the way, the person who has to be happy is you - it's your work, your heart. So I hope you do write more and I'm glad you'll be taking the time to be, as you put... mehr anzeigen

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David_Nanney

If you want me to let people download the book you have to get your friends to read it. =)

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