I started reading the first Chapter of thus book. So far so good.
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I really like your definitely a favorite
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if u like my book please tell me who u r
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I like it lovie, lmao
thanks, it was my first book ever written
really? well done :)
You have quite a bit of errors and it's very hard to read in general.
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I tried to fix it and they just keep coming back my friends are trying to help but they are tired of my book acting up, sorry I will try again
I did fix them, if you wanna try again
What is your first language? I'm not asking to be offensive, but while your basic story is good, there are so many language mistakes and lack of formatting that it's kind of hard to read. This has the feel of a cool movie, or a terrific book series. For that reason, it's worth fixing the errors and learning how to format a novel.
Hope this helps. ')
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Okay, that is it I hate this book site, I am 14 I am english and I only know english this site keeps messing with me and my books, same with my friends. It's ok I will fix it later.
You know, if you can't take being corrected or genuine offers for help, you'll never get very far. No one is messing with you - we're serious writers here, and I'm sorry, but you don't have many paragraphs and there are all kinds of grammatical and spelling errors that make what... mehr anzeigen
Okay I fixed my book
happy
if not just know I may write more and this time I will be more careful!
Lol, cool. Producing a really good book is hard work, but if you love to write, it's worth every minute of effort.
By the way, the person who has to be happy is you - it's your work, your heart. So I hope you do write more and I'm glad you'll be taking the time to be, as you put... mehr anzeigen
Thanks
If you want me to let people download the book you have to get your friends to read it. =)
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thanks