BookRix

Interesting...I do enjoy these types of stories. I see some punctuation errors, but that's all I can criticize about this. Excellent and interesting. Please keep up the work and 'May you make the best of days with your stories'.

Thank you very much i thought no one was going to read it i was starting to get a little worried there.

Hey nice book, what I would recommend though is a bit more details, like when someone new is introduced describe what they look like, smells describe them too, and voices.