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More.Rytin.Needed. No not needed, DEMANDED! Yea thts ryt, i demand u ryt more. If u dnt ryt more, i will, n i promise u this, i will thro a pancake at u... '-' iv done it b4...i enjoyed it...uv been warned.

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This is a really well written opening, I hope you are planning on continuing the story. Whatever you decide it is obvious you have a natural talent for writing :)

This is gettin good! write more soon! PLEASE?! <3

Wow AWESOME first page! You should definitly write more. You are sooo very descriptive. And I LOVVVEEE it. Keep writing. I think this is going to be an awesome series. I also think you are going to be an awesome writer. (somehow I figured all that out with just this one page)