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It was good enough to make me want to find out what happens next...headed for book two!

Good start but does need to check your errors. The sentences are running into the others without spaces. It's a very good concept but is set up like one big sentence. and Vampires are AWESOME!!

Goog concept,but I think that to make it better you should check errors.I liked it! I love to write about vampires,too.

That was really interesting! I liked it!

The story line starts well. Please proof read and spell check to fix spelling and punctuation errors.

verygood

verygood