I'm A Nobody

With One Direction Von:
I'm A Nobody
My Names Vera and so far my life sucks. I'm fifteen years-old and I have a abusive family, everything that happens thats bad I always get blamed for it. Right now I'm not aloude to talk at all, I have to write everything on paper to give it to anyone thats talking to me. And now that I can't talk my sister Sara has me going to alive consurt with One Direction to get there atougraphs for her, and if I talk and my family finds out I'm going to be in so much trouble.

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abuse, One Direction, lonely, a nobody
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Gelöschter User

You're a nobody?
How must that feel.
now you know how everyone feels.
now you know how I feel.
now you know how other people feel.
Now how about you stop worring about your broblumes and think about other problumes in the world.

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scaredbydarkness

I actually really loved this comment!

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Gelöschter User

It's amazing MORE PLZ

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Tell me when YOU WRITE MORE ITS A GREAT BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love-

Rose

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scaredbydarkness

Sorry I haven't been on in a long time its killing me too. I have school and then every time I go to the Public Library every computer is full and its killing me that I can't update. I'm at school right now giving you guys this message and don't worry I might just end up laughing if I get caught so anyway I will try to update soon. I am thinking that I need to redo some of the story that way it sounds better but I'm going to... mehr anzeigen

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scaredbydarkness

I've updated. Sorry it took so long I have been trying to get my grades up and I have other books I'm trying to update too. I had 4 F's now I have only 2. Anyway I hope you all like the update and if you guys have time if you could look at the rest of my books and comment them and tell me what you think I would apreshiat it. Thanks.

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robbedbygreed

Some of the paragraphs are a bit long, but otherwise it's on interesting story. It's a bit like a modern day Cinderelle, but ten times worse. I understand the robotic writing,as that seems the only way Vera can think now, as she isn't given much to do beside sleep, go to school, and work.

A good start :)

---RbG

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