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This made me cry

AWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is such a great story, i literally cried, i love your way of writing <3 <3

Your writing is captivading. It made me cry many times. For some reason, I had a feeling Alan wasn't gone. I loved the whole concept of the book, I just couldn't stop reading. It was mesmerizing, and very detailed. I really do think you should re-check some of your spelling and grammer though. And in some sentences you have missing words. But other than those things, all in all I enjoyed going back in time in your romantic, love, loss, fantisy book. Keep writing and PLEASE never stop!!!
~Ashley

omg!!!!!!!!!! it was an amazing book!!!!! im rlly happy jane and alan ended up bak together :)

sooooo good!!! i hope you rite more!!! this book brought me to tears...hope something good happens and maybe brings alan and jane bak together

What?! How could you let him die?
I can just agree with moolight98. I don't want her with Ken, she must be with Alan at the end!... Such a sad story… :(

But i think it's really good! :)

I am sitting on my bed in tears and then you just stop it. Why did he die come on you can't let him die I don't want her with Ken i want her with Alan I want Alan the public wants Alan we all do. I crying even harder gosh man! :'''''''''( you see that so many tears.

It's a interesting story, but I'm not at the end. Please excuse the worse english, but I'm a german and at school we don't learn that good english! But I understand your story and I like it! :-)
So, I'll read your story soon I can. ;-)

Love,
Kleeblättchen