I really like this book! I seriously think you should have Jasmine and Shawn fall in love with each other, with kissing! XD
O and also I love the Just a kiss series! It made me cry! And I don't usually cry. ;p
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Ohmigod!!! This is sooo amazing!!! Pleasewrite more soon!!!
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My opinion, you should continue write.I have seen with great interess, you was very often hallucinating.Write more as soon as possible!
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I read until she got a car, and her guardian is in the car. Good use of action words, bolt, scramble etc. I am your senior umpteen times - like your writing - it seems to connect with your peers. A suggestion right now, you might think about. - divide scenes up with conclusions that beg the reader to keep going. Keep writing. You can tighten it up some. Have a good day and stay away from the wierd ones- don't knock at your guardian to hard :)
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i am in love with this book, you need yo keep writing!, and we have school together so i will make sure you write lol :)
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i really like it! u should write more!!! (i'm serious! Write more please!)
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