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WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! ps im not trying to rush u i know it is a process, and everything but still i LUV IT ya and plz note me if u can, this is a really good book

djohnson1 you are mean this girl is trying so back off or else

Please don't bash on other people's work...this site is for sharing your books with different people. Not for mean comments, plus this is actually a good idea for a book just needs some work.

Please don't bash on other people's work...this site is for sharing your books with different people. Not for mean comments, plus this is actually a good idea for a book just needs some work.

This book has potenial, you need to do some revising (many errors, spelling, grammar, it's confusing) I couldn't understand the plot I got that Sam has issues about her father killing himself (that's what i got from the details). And she feels the need to be there for her mother...I was surprised by the fact that her mother died so fast, Sam shouldv'e visited her a couple times before she passed during that time there could be crying, feelings come out, etc. Anyway, Cassie shouldn't come up as much as she did. Keil is a good guy, I'm guessing he could really help Sam out of this nothingness type of person she's came up with that describes herself. I'd be happy to give ideas for this...don't write another book 'til you have this straight. I'd love to help but I understand if you don't want handouts. :)
Think about it.

This is probably the worst short story I've ever read in my life LOL

NOTE: NO NEED TO WRITE ANOTHER BOOK

This is probably the WORST short story I've ever read in my life LOL.

NOTE: NO NEED TO WRITE ANOTHER BOOK