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I liked your poems. They are well-crafted, deep and thought-provoking. A good mastery of poetry.Hope u have a look at my bleeding heart collection.

Metered and rhymed poetry. with philosophical, religious and moral themes. Although the rhyme is sometimes stretched and the number of poems somewhat daunting, it is worthwhile to read about this man's love of and belief in God. Perhaps two shorter books would be indicated.

Very entertaining yet thought-provoking Akgoswami.

~Zach B. McClure

Your humor is refreshing and witty!The piece:'Belying Bravado'was well done. I wrote something similar in "Deer Elk'. We are humorous alike! I enjoyed "Is nude rude"-- Very funny! You have earned a star! You also have a lot of guts writing about the political on goings of your Indian country. I mean that in a good way. Bravo

Hi ! All Worthy Poets/Writers/Critics,
Good Morning/Noon/After-noon/Day/or
Evening !
Your worthy comments/observations on
my this meager attempt of poems are also
further sought for very earnestly ever !
Soliciting your valuable words,
Complaisantly yours, akgoswami.

My all the poems are starred poems in the
"p4poetry.com" forum. I always prefer
alliteration, rhythm and particularly the
rhyme, while composing poems, as may be
observed in the poems. Methinks, "poems
without rhyme" is a literary crime!
Thanks everybody!

Thank you for sharing. Good luch and God Bless.

Thank you for participating in our
poetry writing contest "Winter & Poems".

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