BookRix

Hi Ashley, I just finished reading your book. I like the story line you got going,but the only thing for me is, the book moves to fast from one situation to another. I would suggest that you add more details about the characters ( Age, where there from, etc.) Over all i thought it was good. You should keep writing maybe in the first 2 chapters add a little more detail. Good luck Ashley keep going. Oh yeah you have minor grammatical errors, but don't worry that can be fixed.

Um I just started writing and I just wanted to know if it was okay and any ideas of what the book should be like. please comment. thank you