Review - You have captured the world through the eyes of children. Their energy, innocence and happiness. I suspect this is a child's view of Disneyland. Needs a little tightening in editing, outside of that, captivating. Love the cover, cute kids. Nice job. Robynn
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I love it. the prologue part is definitely true. When we see them we can never stop ourselves from playing with them.
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Angelica, never be afraid to share your writing with the good folks here at Bookrix. It's a delightful story you have posted. Keep writing, keep reading, master your craft:)
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I actually like it, is a nice, cute story. The font would be just fine if a little bigger. Keep the good work!
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I read it on my lunch break, it's so adorable. Keep it up!
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Very cute little story. I love the word 'merriment'! It has a charming little ring to it.
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Nice to look at the world AGAIN from a child's view. Thanks,
Laz
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