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A great idea, Angela, power for a day.
What would we do?

I like the story and it leaves me wanting more!

I officially love you!
It was fun to write, that's for sure. In fact, sometime, in the future, I may expand this little story...

Prophesying, Prophecy...who cares? How many angels can one fit on the head of a pin?

The important thing is, this is an excellent, fast-paced (of necessity) story with a definite lesson taught. Thanks for creating it, Angela.

Yes, I think some parts of it can be very true. At least, I'm working on it! Practicing appreciation and law of attraction! ;-)

a lovely thought for an ending - if it only were true...p

It is hard to fit a story into 500 words. Nice piece.

to write such a big idea into such a small format, and i thought you did a decent enough job. Although it became a little fragmented and jumpy, i still enjoyed the concept. Given more words to play with, this could be really good.
- Kade.

Yes, G.D., it works! If you check the second paragraph -- she scans the photographs of "her husband" and children, two years later. Thus, I left it to the reader to figure out that two years ago, when the letter arrived in 2011, it was the beginning of her journey because by 2013, she has a husband.

Does that help?

I am a published writer -- non-fiction, my fiction work, mainly, is plays and screenplays. Also, check out my blog: http://angelaura28.wordpress.com