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Good luck on this, and future writings Angela!

Hi Angela, best of luck with the contest & congrats on your screenplay. I just voted for you :)

Truly enjoy reading feedback, and thank you all for your votes and kind words. This is a script so close to my heart since I lost my father back in 1987. It shares my feelings of confusion, love, adoration, fear and grieving for the first man I loved . . . my Daddy. A man who told me stories, was a great writer and opened a world of words and letters to me.

Thank you for calling your work to my attention. I read first 30 pages and it is compeling and I am voting for it. I will continue to read; sorry my time is so short right now.

It is a story told with such empathy and is one that needs to be told over and over again. I expecially look for music and rhythm that gives the story or in this case an extra punch etc. I can not speak to format of screen play but as I read I began to feel as though I was at a movie with real life going on. Best wishes to you in your writing and movie -TV storytelling.

The four joys of a bookrix contest - good job and glad to see you swimming into the contests mode...p

I encourage everyone to read my script. I worked very hard on it (years, actually) and am happy to have the chance to enter it into a contest.

Keep up the awesome work! You have my vote!

Although I looked up "Royalty Free" photos -- the cover had a watermark and wasn't free. So, here's a new cover with a photograph I took myself. Enjoy!

I hope you enjoyed it. It is a moving piece. I've had a reading of it at a local theatre. We were all bawling by the end, too. I cannot read it and cried while reading. [It is loosely based on people in my life, too].

Brilliant! Honestly, I cried!