Into Her

Sometimes memories are the reason why we can't move on

 

At twenty, Marj is still a mystery to her adoptive family. She never failed to isolate herself from the others. Good at hiding her own feelings, Marj always walk in the dark. She finally get used to it.

 

Enjoy every moment

 

KLVN had given Aksel the priviledge he’d been enjoying for almost 3 ½ years. Together with his 3 mates, KLVN continued to conquer the music industry with the kind of song and music they produce. His life became better. Aksel finally had the life he ever wanted.

 

Then the fate brought them together.

 

Would Marj be able to appreciate the world she’d been long neglecting?

 

Would Aksel start to change for the better?

 

Would they fall in love with each other?

 

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still working on it

 

Thank you for reading :)


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Gelöschter User

The cover is beautiful, it caught my eye. The writing is colloquial. Do you know what I mean. I mean an English speaking reader who lives Filipino would enjoy it very much but to the rest of the English speaking world it is hard to understand. That is both good and bad. It adds flavor or reality. BUT it will not be popular far from home. I think you know that so you know what to do. Good luck and gracias for sharing.

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Angela Escalona
Angela Escalona

Thank you for an honest review. I know what you mean. hahaha. I'm trying, though I find it hard to really express myself in English :)

Gelöschter User

All I can suggest is read a lot and time will be your helper. As we read we absorb the thinking and the way of thinking of the author. Good luck.

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