A brilliant piece of writing. The story is wonderful. I like the dedication--it speaks of you as a writer with a great imagination. You invented characters--Zelda being my favorite--that have been mistreated yet present themselves to be good and moral people who are against injustice. I enjoyed how you jumped back and forth between story lines to introduce the characters. The action was intense and suspenseful, but at a very... mehr anzeigen
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its great thought actually with good imagination,did u do some wrk?
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pratapme
i hope soo with ur assistance,and help
pratapme
actually i read ur book ,i am in quater of it ,its so intersting to carry on but very good with tat char who is hero ,he is great and nice sift in the scencee
dysamyne
Thank you
Oh thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Because it's the prequel I wanted to introduce a few of the characters whom will appear in the series such as Zelda and Olivia for example to kind of give people an idea of how their connected in the series. Originally I wrote this... mehr anzeigen
Oh thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Because it's the prequel I wanted to introduce a few of the characters whom will appear in the series such as Zelda and Olivia for example to kind of give people an idea of how their connected in the series. Originally I wrote this book last because I didn't have the idea for it till a few years after I wrote the other three but I recommend this one first so that way people can get an idea of what to expect in the series and again I'm glad that you enjoyed it and I hope that the other three will be just as entertaining to you.
Well, you know what, I'm half way through Space Pirates and the Battle for Power and could see how you, as a writer, used your exquisite imagination to make the the prequel fit the story and the characters. I'll explain more when I finish the story.
Oh cool and that was actually what I had planned on doing. Actually I had to go back into the series so I wouldn't mess anything up when I was working on the prequel.