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I like the update a lot, but you gotta focus on your grammar and punctuation. Other than those two things it was good. I can't wait for more!

First off LOVED IT!!! Seconed, I really liked the whole concept of the book. It just pulled me in. It was just so interesting. But, Yes there is a but, you do need to work on your editing skills. Other than the editing I Was amazed!!! Please continue. I REALLY want to know what happens.