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Very nice, very emotional. A few punctuation issues, but overall very good.

You have expressed so much emotion, Alexis in so few words. It is as though you write from the heart.

Nice cover, good message, I misread one line and laughed till tears came to my eyes.

Yeah, about the stanza or verse thing, it would be a great help. Also editing but I like!

Still could use a bit of editing. You might also consider writing in verse format. That would make it easier to read.

let you you book hit my heart

Very interesting. Although it does need a little editing. A few misspelled words.

Looking forward to the next update.

If you want I could help with the edit.

Forgot to mention, I love the cover too. :o)

You are right, it should become a book. It is poetry of the heart. I love it, and I am looking forward to more. :o)

Good start