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In general I like the book and hope you continue with it, though angels and stories centered around religion aren't my thing. My biggest gripe with the book is simply that it has a lot of small errors that made me stop reading. I wrote down a couple of the errors, just to give you an idea of what to look out for, but I suggest writing more, before going back through everything to edit.
Page 4
“He was tall and was staring at me with a concern look.” (Concern should be changed to concerned, or the sentence should be changed to something like: was staring at me intensely.)
“his eyebrows were pulled together as if he was in big stress.” (Change it to something like: his eyebrows were pulled together, implying he was stressed out.)
Page 15
I finally able to look at him said, (This is just a very confusing line, I highly recommend rewording it, or stripping it down to I said.)
Page 18
I can’t believe what I heard. (This is present tense, everything else is in past tense, change it to past like this: I couldn’t believe what I heard.)
Page 28
“Watch your smart mouth, I can drag you to hell with moi.” (This one is pretty obvious, just change moi to me.)

very good read thanks for the book