BookRix

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beautiful book but is it your story?

Well you can’t just leave it at that! Yeah it’s a little rough around the edges but who isn’t rough when their just starting out. I like it. It’s a bit like twilight thought (not saying just like twilight it’s just I watched it today and I kinda got some of the same concept). It’s got some real potential if you keep at it and don’t give up. If you have a word processor then you can type it up on there and paste it on the site and that will help with any grammar (though I don’t remember seeing but one, maybe) punctuation problems and paragraphing. It was a little hard to read because the paragraphs were starting in the middle of dialogues but I thought it was a pretty good idea. Tell me when you update?
~Nina~

Nice