So cute
Please do kidnap the Sandy Claws from Nightmare before Christmas.
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this story was amazing you should write more , fell in love just wow i couldn't stop reading it was great
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Never read anything like this before... Love this book!! Love everything about it!!
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It's quickly written, but pretty good. I'm having trouble reading the lines and dialogue because there is no indenting or paragraphing.
Instead of:
...I think she's weird. But in a way, she's nice. We didn't get homework, thank goodness. The bell finally rang, and I trudged towards the gym.
Try:
...I think she's weird. But in a way, she's nice.
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I appreciate the comment(: Thanks very much!!
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most stories that i read about teenage pregnancies are sad and filled with terrible things. parents that disown their daughters, boyfriends who ditch them, friends who pretend they don't know them anymore... your story is so upbeat and positive. it really is the happiest story about teenage pregnancy that i've ever read. a little unrealistic, but good!
there are a few small mistakes, and here are a couple for example:
page 10
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Please finish the book. It is really good.
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