Wichtiger Beitrag
Wichtiger Beitrag
SO cool!!!!!
you need to put spaces after your commas and periods... there are also a few spelling errors in the first few chapters...
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i like that he was stolen by the demons while camping - so weird.
you need somebody to edit your story for you, there are lots of little mistakes.
why is everyone writing about nephilim all of a sudden???
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