Hey Anthony, So I finally had time to read your book, and I must say that, I really enjoyed it. I really like the story line of it. I did notice that your natural talent as a script/screenplay writer plays a part in your writing, Which I find interesting. Personally I really liked it. Keep that pen Movin Anthony!
Quick Update: So far, I'm still having a case of writers block for Sibil Rivalry. Don't get me wrong I know where I want to take it, just getting there is the rough part. Don't fear it will get finished! I do however have something I've been testing the water out on for a screenplay/script. I'm writing it in a television format because there are going to be multiple seasons. When I get the first season completely done, I will... mehr anzeigen
sounds very interesting, tell me when you do the upload :)
Thank you! And I sure will :)
Sometimes Anthony when I get writers block, I take a cup of coffee and go outside just to take in the scene. My inspirations for stories come from everywhere. Writer's block sucks but can be fixed. I get writers block a lot because I have a habit of writing multiple stories at a... mehr anzeigen
The Other Side Of The Sidewalk is now completed! Let me know what you think
Thank you Anthony, for letting me know. I will read it as soon as I get a chance. Can't wait to read it.
thanks for the friend request :)
nice! If you happen to have a lot of spare time to kill at the moment, I would be delighted if you would read my book. I will by chance do the same for you, at the moment it's pretty impossible though, I have so many things to do.
Yeah that's not a problem. Once I'm done with my short story, I will definitely check it out. I'm almost done. Just have a little bit more to go.
cool, thanks in advance. I gotta go now, see you soon!
Hey, thanks for the heart :) i've been reading some of your work and I must say its not bad. keep writing, and just so you know i just did a little update on the book :)
Not a problem :) and thank you for the compliment. I'm hoping to get at least one of the ideas I have (and I have at least 3-4 more in progress that I haven't posted yet) published at some point. I'll be sure to take a look once I get this short story done. It's almost complete!
random thoughts: Ditched work this morning. Took a train out to the pier... I don't know why, I'm not an impulsive person. Guess I just woke up in a funk this morning. I gotta get my car fixed. It's damn near freezing on this beach. Sand is overrated. It's just tiny little rocks. If only I could meet someone new. I guess my chances of that happening are somewhat diminished, seeing that I'm incapable of making eye contact with... mehr anzeigen
You sound EXACTLY like my little brother - who just turned 31 (and is like a foot taller than I am!) He's one of those smart, attractive, talented yet nervous sorts of guys who thinks that if a female (unless she's a 'grandma') looks at him -- must be looking at someone else!
Yeah it's rough :/ but maybe one day..
Quick little note - on page 3 - at the end of the paragraph at the beginning of the page, you need to put in a hard return after the word 'eat' and then remove the extra space between that paragraph and the one following it.
Page 4 - When Ms. Q starts her 'Oh, yeah, I'm in charge speech' - do a hard return after '...ears awaiting her words.' OR remove the space after those same words so that her comment is right after it.
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Thank you Ms. Avery. That's a really good idea about writing it in a word document as I have been writing all of it on here. I was wondering why certain things weren't lining up well haha I'm glad you like it so far.
Welcome to Bookrix!
Thanks! :)
Thank you Ms. Latrice! I appreciate your comments. I almost felt with the way I wrote it, that it would stray people away from enjoying it. I was going to turn it into a three part story if enough people liked it. But I'll wait and see how it pans out.