Well...I see that u have got quite some good comments... love ur work..I am looking forward on reading more!

A quick note: "Try how each one feels like" - page 17. The correct form is either "Try what each one feels like" or "Try how each one feels." The "like" at the end of the sentence the way it stands is redundant.

Okay. That's all that needs to be tweaked. The rest is magnificent.

Too many people think that if you can just rhyme words at the end of each line, you've written poetry. You, however, have grasped its heart and are able to state things in a memorable, deeply meaningful, and beautiful way. And that is true poetry!

Good second chapter that gives a satisfying follow-up to the first. Some punctuation and grammatical boo-boos but nothing difficult to fix. When it's all done, be sure to give it a thorough, deep edit and you'll have something incredible that many will enjoy reading. Great stuff, great insights, great work!

OMFG That was fucking amazing like I don't know what else to say other than say I didn't get this feelings until 3 days ago when I started dating my boyfriend Matthew

You have a refreshing style that is unusual and pleasing. It is even captured in your cover. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing.

Nice heartfelt discription of one's love and loss. This is almost like a diary. Keep it going.
A couple of small errors...nothing to worry about.
And...your second letter starts out in the present tense, then continues in the past.
Again...easily fixed.
Good work.
Laz

This sounds so much like a really fine Prologue. You have a way with words that's extremely pleasing. Hope to read more as you write.